jueves, 6 de octubre de 2011

Level 7- "An amazing story"

Dear students,
Do not forget to post your drafts with your name on it. Use past progressive vs Past simple with connectors like: while, when and As..

2 comentarios:

JOHNFRE dijo...

X-TREME SPORTS

Once week ago I was at Medellín. I practiced paraglinding with my friends. It was exciting and awesome. I could see the view and the people was walking in the street. While I was fliying, my friends looked at me. I flew up in the air when I was chasing a bird. Finally the bird flew away, but I was flying around the city. As I was trying to land on I crashed with a tree. Also, I had problems with my equipment because I lost the control of paraglinding. As I was taking off the equipment my friends came and help me. My experience it was wicked.

Cherozze dijo...

Minor mistakes but great job in the use of past tense!!